First Summer....

[shaulis]

STS,
l loved this chapter and the entire story. We got to hear from the younger Zach and Ryan again. We got to use our own imaginations to know what new experience Ben and Erik had on the dock and what Dylan and Brad did on their final night in Maine. I can only hope you write of Erik, Dylan and Ben again sometime in the future. Thank You for all the time you put into your stories that we love to read. I will reread your other stories until you think up another story. Thanks again.

Brian

[Dooley67]

STS,

What a wonderful ending to the story. It was great to get to know Zach and Ryan as early teenagers kind of like a prequel to the other stories when they were in college and on the swim team. The dialogue was so good and the suggestions of what Erik and Ben did and what Brad and Dylan did had just the amount of information to have the reader draw his own conclusions. A huge thank you for the work you put in - and hoping there will be more to come in the future.

D67

[solarguy]

Great story!! Thanks for all the work you put into it. I'm kind of sad that there will be no more chapters to look forward to!!

[Swimmboy]

This story was a joy to read from first chapter to last. Thanks for sharing this with us, and we all look forward to the next time you put 'pen to paper' with a new story!