[Dooley67]

Another wonderful and very hot chapter. You do such a good job of capturing the playfulness of Dylan and Brad while Dylan is experiencing some serious awakening of feelings he didn't know that he had and maybe has come to recognize as a part of him. Without being specific about what Brad and Dylan did, the sensuality of their play in the water certainly comes through and was very arousing as I read it. As for Ben and Erik, you keep showing us in each chapter how they are becoming closer in their relationship and in their openness about their powerful attraction to each other. It makes me look forward to each new chapter.

D67