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Old 12-20-2014, 12:14 PM
SwimTeamSpeedo SwimTeamSpeedo is offline
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Originally Posted by sebbie
Swim team escapades are an ok story line I guess but have almost nothing to do with the story line I was thinking of here, which was related directly to the dilemma young people seeking information about sex and sexuality now find themselves in.

Sebbie, I guess I am really confused. If you had a plan and a plot that you wanted to write about then why did you ask other members to join in (and you never gave any plot rules)? If you did not want it about swim team why did your very first chapter start with a swim team named the Tornados? Once you gave the story a "take it from here" invite, you opened it up to flow where the next writer was going to take it. Since there are only a small number of members who actually write stories on the board, and the plot lines of many of those stories are very consistent to how you started this one, I would say you got exactly what you asked for.

My suggestion, you simply take the story exclusively from here. It sounds like that is what you wanted all along. D67 and I, along with any others who want to jump in, can continue the Tornados story line at its new home, under the a title that more reflects the story than "We need a new story".

STS

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